Did you see what I posted on the previous page? About how the sprite links were broken?

Your sprites aren't bad, but there are a few inconsistencies. The mouth looks way too close to the chimtwig's eye, and I think the shell could be raised a little. There are black pixels around its "fringe" and the shape of the head seems messy.

The second one has something wrong with the left eye, and the way the leg on the right juts out looks wrong, especially compared to the left leg's straight positioning. The black outlines around the crotch area look misplaced and too dark, especially with the lighter outlines around it. The bush on the back also looks oddly placed and the small puff at the back looks poorly shaded and not properly outlined.

Nevertheless, I think it's a good idea. Just needs improvement.


~SF.