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"I know, I know, DarkNerd. x) No worries!"



I like the animation you've added to Rob, but the lines under his eyes look like dark marks from when people don't get enough sleep. XD The lighting on the icons got smoother, but now they're encompassing too much of the icons. XD And they're still not in sync with the movement of the icons. I think the white you've added to the PXR logo wasn't a good addition; it's harder to see now and the complete red was much better. xD The top part of the f on the facebook symbol is too long and reaches the edge of the blue, while the actual icon does not. The placement of the f within the box is much better though; you just need to shorten the top part of the f. It shouldn't surpass the line underneath it, but rather be in line with it.

The lineart on the monocle still needs to be darker; you can't see it properly yet. Same with the ghost's mouth lines. When I mean darken it, I mean quite a bit, not just a few tones. Also, the waving hair on Mayor Wayne is moving too rapidly to look real so it just looks sort of out of place. lel.

Nevertheless, good work! I CRITICISE BECAUSE I CARE.


~SF.