Quote Originally Posted by Kentucky Fried Torchic View Post
Ack! Thank goodness for your keen eyes! My editor will be getting an earful over this.

There are some old biddies who prefer the silver lining of gossip to the dark cloud of tragedy, especially if they can be tied to it and thereby gain some notoriety themselves.

Thankfully towards the end of the writing process I came up with the happier ending, but I agree that both endings could be considered "heartwarming" in some way.

Thanks for taking the time to read my story! It means a lot to me!
XD Get an earful! Aw it's okay. Sometimes it's hard to catch things. I can N E V E R seem to spot all my own mistakes, haha. ALSO I actually corrected it to "too" at first because my brain is dumb (even though I know it's meant to be "to") which @Fate called me out on. XD So thank him too!

Oh yes, that's a good point. I guess it seemed odd to me because I'm not a COLD-HEARTED CLEFABLE!!!!!!

Yeah exactly. :D I like them both!

Aw no worries, Phantasm! <3 Been a while since I read anything of yours.