Since I've No Place to Go [Winter Carnival Heartwarming Story]

[Kentucky Fried Torchic]

I think I like the sad ending best too. I felt like the whole story was kind of leading up to that sad but sweet release. Poor Charmander.

I like the mysteriousness of the Snorlax being made out of snow and the descriptions of how a Charmander would fare in that kind of weather. The hissing of the snow landing on his tail was really nice imagery. :) Thanks for sharing!

Thank you for taking the time to read my story and letting me know your thoughts!

At first I was a little worried that the story was going to seem too plodding and repetitive, but then I realized that those adjectives sum up this poor Charmander's night, even his whole life. That's my excuse and I am sticking to it! I am glad to hear that you found the touches with the Charmander's walk out in the cold interesting. Some Pokemon just are not made for certain kinds of weather or environments I am afraid.

Also, I finally found the story that subconsciously inspired my mysterious "Snowlax": The Snowman by Raymond Briggs.