[User Challenges] Chikorita's story

[XaiakuX]

I have never been so invoked with rage and sorrow at the same time. I actually probably have, but this is new to my forgetful brain! Like, it's good and well written. That's the problem, though. The direction this story took right off the bat had me fuming.

Dude, that first trainer is just dreadful. Like, why even be a Pokemon trainer with that attitude. That mentality makes a good villain, I guess. Then the other trainer is like me. Why is this happening, who would be so messed up as to burn a meadow and a weak helpless Pokemon. Like, let me find this kid, I'll slap him around and show him what's what. Boi, you gon' learn! You gon' burn worse than that Chikorita! Like, Chapter 2, Trainer B encounters a trainer bragging to his buddies about teaching that Chikorita a lesson for being weak. Then they just full on hulk smash his face with a Wood Hammer attack, no Pokemon Battle required.

I'm mad. Why you do this?