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    Winter's Sharing Time (Poems and Stuff)

    So. I write poetry sometimes. I have to be in a certain mood to do it, but...yeah. I've been in a poetry mood most of this morning, and felt like sharing, so... Here. Have some poetry from Winter. XD Some of this is old, some of it is new, take it for what you will.

    Shoes
    Spoiler:
    I stare down
    At the all black Converse
    With the neon green laces
    On my feet.

    They're a full size too big,
    Feel kinda floppy,
    Because they're elevens rather than tens
    But I couldn't let go of the box in the store.

    They look like boots,
    Only high tops I liked,
    Reminds me of my childhood
    When I would try to wear my father's shoes.

    He wore heavy work boots
    Way too big for me.
    They would swallow me whole,
    Trip me up.

    Now I'm 16 going on 17
    And staring at a pair of all black Converse
    With neon green laces
    On my feet.

    I'm all grown up now (well, mostly)
    But now I'm wearing shoes a full size too big
    And thinking, remembering
    About a time when I ran around wearing my father's shoes.

    Fun Fact: I think I still have those shoes. My mother HATES them.


    The Best Friend's Fate
    Spoiler:
    I watch her slip
    Through my fingers
    Like grains of sand that
    Have already become little
    Shards of glass
    That cut as the slide
    Out of my grasp.

    But some catch
    In the wounds,
    And sting and stay
    So I can never truly let her go
    Even when she never tried
    To hold onto me in turn,
    Never tried
    To hold onto any of
    Us from her past in turn.

    More than ten years
    Without word,
    And I
    Still held onto some
    Crazy hope that
    Maybe she would come back,
    Send word back
    Give us any sign that she was
    Still alive.
    But she gave none.

    And then a call.
    She’s getting married,
    Going to have twins,
    And she never planned
    To tell me
    Or any of us.

    The guy’s nice,
    But he’s slipping
    More rapidly through her fingers
    Than she is mine.
    But she will go through with it
    Anyway.

    And she is tough,
    Tougher than any other girl
    I ever knew,
    But I also know she is likely
    To break a second time,
    Like she did the first…

    But she will not
    Listen to me.
    And so I will watch
    Her slip through my fingers
    Yet never allow me to let her go,
    Not completely.
    Even when she hates me
    And I
    Am doomed to watch her
    Break again.

    Fun Fact: This? It's not about me, but a male character of mine. I had a friend who read it and thought it was...his reaction was pretty hilarious.


    Leaving Rome
    Spoiler:
    Rome was not
    Built in a day.
    Rome did not
    Fall in a day either.

    But nothing is more
    Saddening than knowing
    The same hands that
    You used to build Rome
    You also used to
    Pull Rome down,
    Packed up your belongings,
    And pulled them,
    To another home you cannot
    Quite begin to make your own

    Fun Fact: Written the day my family and I moved out of our old house.


    Little Match Girl
    Spoiler:
    You are
    Frigid, Freezing, Colder than Cold
    Your solution? Take yourself
    What makes you live--
    Your own embers, and
    Kindle them into flames.

    Silly little match girl
    If only you knew
    You were burning off
    Your own life.

    Instead you wonder
    Why you never get any warmer,
    But grow hollow
    And your body fills with ice.

    Fun Fact: Written at almost 2 am for an ollllllllld RP character who decided she wanted me to remember her.

    Warning
    Spoiler:

    Ice is deadly-beautiful;
    Lovely-innocent and
    Wicked-sharp.
    Be careful, children--
    Love it too much,
    Draw too close,
    And it will awe
    Your heart into stopping
    Forever.

    Fun Fact: The dA description for this piece reads "Be careful, Straton." There are very few people who will actually understand what this relates to.

    Sola
    Spoiler:

    Sometimes I feel
    Ancient, older than
    The trees that grow
    In the heart of long forgotten
    Forests, that have been
    Left alone for so long
    They don't remember
    When they were just saplings.

    When I voice these thoughts,
    The breeze only laughs,
    Ruffles my hair like I
    Think my mom used to.
    It whispers back,
    "Eighteen is not ancient, dearest,"
    But it doesn't know like I do.

    Minutes with him were years
    Hours were decades
    Twelve years was forever,
    Until one day came along
    And an old lullaby
    Broke the curse.


    Phantom
    Spoiler:

    Wants to be
    Loved, just like
    Everyone else,
    But when someone
    Comes too close--
    Shoves them away and
    Screams "Don't touch me!
    I don't want you to die!"

    (Sucks in their color because they suck out his own.)

    Fun fact: Fueled by Phantom of the Opera, a poet on dA called Oaklungs, and frustration.

    Just Imagine
    Spoiler:
    Quietly, in the dark
    Two hands reach,
    Search across empty miles
    To beds beyond their own
    Seeking cold,
    Seeking warmth,
    From the other.

    For a moment,
    If they believe hard enough,
    Their fingerstips might just
    Brush before the connection
    Snaps.

    Fun fact: Mmmm...I'll leave this one up to complete speculation. XD

    Kanon
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    Everything is beautiful, dear
    Child. Remember that.
    Could be wonderful beauty
    That takes your breath
    Away, launches a thousand
    Ships, even starts entire
    Wars, or
    Could be terrible beauty
    That disgusts you, makes
    You turn your eyes
    Away, cry out in your darkest
    Nightmares for the bad to
    End, but
    No matter what,
    Dearest, don't you ever
    Forget that because
    I think I have and
    All the color has run
    Out into the gutters like
    The blood of innocents
    Who were just in the wrong
    Place at the wrong
    Time, and I swear I love
    You but dearest I
    Can't live in a world where
    I can't see the color, the
    Beauty that used to
    Be everywhere, the
    Only truth I ever knew
    Turned to dust on the wind.

    I love you but
    The beauty's all
    Gone and so I
    Just can't stay.

    Fun fact: My brain just kind of exploded into words. Based on one of my most obscure NPCs in a RP ever. XD And she'll never make an appearance, either.

    Conversation
    Spoiler:
    “You see,” she says,
    “I wear my headphones,
    “Turn up the volume,
    “To block out the silence.
    “It took a brother and a sister from me
    “Once upon a time.”
    “Don’t block it out,” he replies,
    “Fight, sing, fill
    “The empty quiet, let your voice
    “Be your sword, and take back
    “What the silence stole from you.”

    Fun Fact: This is from the same universe Kanon is from.




    So, that's all for now, folks! Might or might not post more later, but hope you enjoyed these. Feel free to leave feedback--I love hearing what people think.
    Last edited by Winter; 05-24-2015 at 05:59 AM.

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    I like them! They are pretty good! I'm not sure how I feel about how you split up your sentences onto different lines so often, but that's just my opinion. I particularly liked "Warning" And "The Best Friends Fate"

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    Thank you, DM! I tend to write my poetry split like that partly because I simply don't like long lines in poetry, and partly because that's how I've seen it done by the poets I like. That, and I feel like if I made my lines much longer in some places, it'd come out looking a lot like how I write normally. Glad to know there are favorites...I think my favorite of all of them would have to be "Little Match Girl" or "Warning." The narrator of "The Best Friend's Fate" actually has several pieces (both poetry and prose) I've written for him (also done art for him), but I'm not as fond of those as I am of that particular piece.

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    Someone else decided she wanted poetry written about her...

    Sola
    Spoiler:

    Sometimes I feel
    Ancient, older than
    The trees that grow
    In the heart of long forgotten
    Forests, that have been
    Left alone for so long
    They don't remember
    When they were just saplings.

    When I voice these thoughts,
    The breeze only laughs,
    Ruffles my hair like I
    Think my mom used to.
    It whispers back,
    "Eighteen is not ancient, dearest,"
    But it doesn't know like I do.

    Minutes with him were years
    Hours were decades
    Twelve years was forever,
    Until one day came along
    And an old lullaby
    Broke the curse.

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    These are really good, Winter! My favourite would be Little Match Girl too. :) I like how the last line sounds and it rhymes with the previous paragraph, tying it together nicely. Your newest one is really nice, too. Makes me wonder about the story behind it!
    GCEA


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    Thanks, Sarah! Glad to hear you like them. The newest one has a...very, very long, complicated story behind it, honestly. XD

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    I'm pretty sure it's based off a loved one, but the story behind it does seem complex. But honestly Winter, these poems are great! I love your new one...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pokeman View Post
    I'm pretty sure it's based off a loved one, but the story behind it does seem complex. But honestly Winter, these poems are great! I love your new one...
    XDDD I actually don't write much about my own life/people I know. Here, Shoes and Leaving Rome are the only exceptions. Everything else is based on characters I've worked with, be it in stories, RPs, etc. The stories behind them are no less complex, though... Actually Sola's (in this case, since there are a few different versions of her, so to speak) is pretty twisted, and actually ties into The Best Friend's Fate, though unless you know all the connections (oh gosh, there are so many now), it's not going to click completely. XD

    I'm really glad to hear you like these, though!

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    Plus, The Best Friend's Fate. I LITERALLY THOUGHT THAT WAS BASED OFF YOUR LIFE XD. Plus, is it odd that I sing in a rhythm to your poems and everyone else's? xD But what was weird to me is that I felt a bit of tears coming on as I sung it... Man, these poems are sooooo emotional... Keep up the good work, honestly!

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    Please tell me you read the note below it. XD It threw one of my friends, too. It's nice to know my poems make people feel something, though. :) Thank you!

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