Gible Bites (Comic) plus chat!

[Rival Max]

Imma try some ideas for you. c: Well, just one for now. xD

Get out of my head lol did you know part of my section was going to include a thread called dear gible where people could submit questions!

[Suicune's Fire]

HEH! I knew it was a good idea! xD Lol. I'll hold off until then. x)

[FedoraChar]

I'm late to the party, but...



Haha loved the little cameo xD Although I think if I really was Grace's day-planner the universe would descend into chaos xD I am THE most disorganized person ever.

BUT DAT FEDORA <3

I've got a lot to catch up on, but that's awesome that you're getting your own sub-forum! :D

[Rival Max]

I'm late to the party, but...



Haha loved the little cameo xD Although I think if I really was Grace's day-planner the universe would descend into chaos xD I am THE most disorganized person ever.

BUT DAT FEDORA <3

I've got a lot to catch up on, but that's awesome that you're getting your own sub-forum! :D

Im glad you like it!

[XaiakuX]

You and Grace are close so I needed you in there. I tried to get people that I figured Grace would deal with on the forum. I couldnt possible get everyone..she talks to everyone..lol

Well yeah, Xanthe's one of the few people who actually know "Caleb" as opposed to "The Awesome X-Kun." I have a lot of love and respect for her.

Also, Xanthe sitting through a tiresome rant about me is actually a thing that has happened. Multiple times.

[PTGigi]

Congrats on getting your own sub-forum! And loving the improvement with your art too! :D

[Rival Max]

Congrats on getting your own sub-forum! And loving the improvement with your art too! :D

Thank a lot! Your comic is amazing as is the awesome styles of the other artist. I hope with time i create something as good as you.

[Rival Max]

Finally!!!!!

#21 X-mas better now than never ;)




















Edited :)

[Suicune's Fire]

Awww Gible! You slept through Christmas! That was a silly thing to do! xD Omg I can't believe he did that. I loved the comic though. The rhyming was great. And the groudon plushie is so adorable. <3 There were a few errors though, which I can help with. x)

First panel: I think it should say "When I arose to such a clutter!"

Second panel: I reckon "sprang" would work better than "spring" since it's all in past tense.

Fourth panel: Maybe Gible's speech should end with a question mark.

I don't think "appear" and "hair" rhyme, but maybe they do with different accents. xD

The panel where Delibird is stealing everything: Should be "It was as they warned us"

The panel with Delibird walking away with the presents in his sack: There shouldn't be a period on the end of "After all was said and done" because the sentence continues. x)

And that's all! xD But really, I loved this edition. It was very funny and well drawn. I especially like Gible's frightened face near the end. XD


SO EXCITED FOR MINE!!!

[Rival Max]

Awww Gible! You slept through Christmas! That was a silly thing to do! xD Omg I can't believe he did that. I loved the comic though. The rhyming was great. And the groudon plushie is so adorable. <3 There were a few errors though, which I can help with. x)

First panel: I think it should say "When I arose to such a clutter!"

Second panel: I reckon "sprang" would work better than "spring" since it's all in past tense.

Fourth panel: Maybe Gible's speech should end with a question mark.

I don't think "appear" and "hair" rhyme, but maybe they do with different accents. xD

The panel where Delibird is stealing everything: Should be "It was as they warned us"

The panel with Delibird walking away with the presents in his sack: There shouldn't be a period on the end of "After all was said and done" because the sentence continues. x)

And that's all! xD But really, I loved this edition. It was very funny and well drawn. I especially like Gible's frightened face near the end. XD


SO EXCITED FOR MINE!!!

Thanks ! I updated with your edits :)
This took a long time to come out !!! I had fun drawing it and for hours yesterday I couldnt stop rhyming!!! lol