[WAR] Creative Writing

[3m0d0ll]

WAR Team: Team Aqua.
Title: Bug Bite.
Form: Journal Entry/Short story.
Link.

[Tenacity]

I didn't really have time to finish it to a point where I would be satisfied, so the ending's a little rushed. I apologise if that shows in my work.

WAR Team: Team Trainer
Title: The Nature of Things
Form: Short Story
Link: The Nature of Things

[Grassy_Aggron]

My entry will be up in a jiffy. You said we had until the 14th, and it's still the 13th for me so |D

WAR Team: Team Awesome
Title: Broken Crust
Form: Short Story
Link: Broken Crust. Click. You know you want to.

[Dash]

ENTRIES HAVE BEEN JUDGED

I would like to thank all the people who have joined this week. I had some excellent entries, and the results have been posted on the front page with the scores. The winners for this week are:

Grassy_Aggron of Team Awesome for First Place

and

Suicune's Fire for Second Place


The new theme shall be up as of some time tomorrow. If you want to suggest a theme, please feel welcome to. However, I won't promise that I'll do some of my own editing ;D

[Pokemon Trainer Sarah]

Yay congrats guys! :D I just finished reading Grassy's story and it was definitely really good. And I am super curious about what Pokemon it was meant to be!

Would you mind posting the grading for the stories @Lightning Dash? (Or PM me mine if you prefer?) I'm interested to see how I can improve for next week. :D

[Dash]

@Pokemon Trainer Sarah

Yeah, sorry about that ._." I actually have a reason for this. Spoilers as of recently don't work for me and double or triple, breaking apart my posts, so I tried to make it less cramped and not put your personal scores. I'll put them here, since anyone can go and look at Grassy's and Flare's:

Sarah
Creativity: 5
Flow: 5
Appeal: 3
Interaction: 5
Grammar: 4

@Neo Emolga
Creativity: 4
Flow: 5
Appeal: 3
Interaction: 4
Grammar: 5

@Tenacity
Creativity: 4
Flow: 4
Appeal: 3
Interaction: 3
Grammar: 3

[Suicune's Fire]

May I ask what grammar I failed with? Was it all the typos I made that people corrected? xD That's fair enough. I can never catch my own typos. :c ANYWAY, CONGRATULATIONS, GRASSY! Damn my typos though! XD

Can't wait for next/this week's. c:


~SF.

[Neo Emolga]

Yeah, I'll admit I kind of did mine in a rush. But thanks for taking it into consideration anyway.

[Grassy_Aggron]

Thanks guys. I think all of your entries are wonderful - I still have to read Tenacity and Neo's, but I'm sure I won't be disappointed - and I'm still surprised I won, considering I'm rather annoyed at how suddenly my story stops. Darn that Sudden Stop Syndrome, darn it all and back!

I can't wait for the new theme. If it's more flexible this time, we'll all be able to really show off what we can do~

[Voltaire Magneton]

I'll try to join sometime. When I find the theme good.

Also, I'll suggest that the next theme must have music as an inspiration. Something like that.

Also, congrats to the winner!