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Aggronholic
I am slowly getting to reading these.
All of the feels! It was pretty well built up, but I kind of wish we got to know Styzer a little better too. Since we didn't see much interaction between them, her dying didn't have as much impact. The main character's reaction however spoke oodles about it. I do have one gripe, and I guess this is just personal preference, and that's just Sneasel are used a lot for thieves. I wouldn't liked to see, say, a Lillipup or something used. Something unusual and not so commonly stereotyped into the thief role, you know?
But other than that (and some of the occasionally really difficult grammar - I had to reread the parts a few times to make it register, although I could just be tired) it was a beautiful story. I want to punch that guard in the face, btw.
Made by the awesome X-Kun~
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