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I like the new poem! It's interesting. I think I know what angle you're taking...maybe. xD Two things about it seem slightly out of place, though:
The second line doesn't really make sense. I think if "show" was "shows" then it would. Or writing "Nor does a gloved...(etc)"
The other thing is where it has "dreaming." on a new line. It's odd that there's a period in the start of the line. Unless that was a particular stylisation decision, but even then I don't know if it works that well. Although if you like it, then that's fine. xD
Frozen was good. I watched Tangled last night for the first time and I really enjoyed it. x) I think I liked it more than Frozen, possibly. xD Anyway, good writing. 8)
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