1. Yeah, that sounds great. ^^ I have a few things to do today, but I plan to remain at home, so I'll see if I can read some more and review it too. :D I'll probably not comment on repeated errors (such as speech grammar) which I've already pointed out, but I might just do a reminder per chapter or something. xD We'll see!

2. Ah, that's okay. I mean, as important as grammar is, the importance of a decent story trumps it!

3. Ahh well that's great! I like that phones have the capability to help with random inspiration strikes. xD Personally I have difficulty typing on my phone most of the time (and autocorrect makes me fume) so I always try to keep my fingers on a keyboard. xD

4. I think accents are pretty subjective in a story. To be honest, I often get a little frustrated when people make major speech changes to cater for an accent. I do, however, like simple things like cutting out words or alternate word arrangement (i.e. "How you do today?") or apostrophes in the place of a g in a word ending with "ing" (i.e. "Are we playin' soon?") and also condensed phrases like "going to" into "gonna" or "want to" into "wanna." So yeah...accent stuff isn't too crucial, I don't think. x) It's hard to write an accent.

5. That makes sense. x) I suppose it's up to preference once the numbers climb.

6. Okay, that's good. :D

7. That is also good! XD

I think that's a good plan. Absolutely! Take your time. x) No rushes here. And haha, well, if I ever see you snap at me, I'll take it as a bad day and not hold it against you. XD