I like this so far.

I do think it would have been best, though, to keep it as one part. Also you very well could have dropped some clue a here and there to make it discernable what Pokemon it is if the reader reads closely enough, but simultaneously not too obvious. In the initial prologue chapter, I mean! x]

I would also say not to drag it on too much of you suddenly start to feel like you're trying to force chapter ideas out. But if you still have some ideas with where you want to take this story...then full steam ahead!

Hey, now. Don't rail on us competitive breeders. There's a lot of complexity in the system, and it's a fantastic way to give away some Pokemon with wonderful IVs to random people across the world. Also, for pedantic people like me...it's fun.

Also, a lot of us don't feel like using the accented "e," because the majority of the time you seriously have to go out of your way to do so unless you're using a smartphone. Which is inconvenient. I think that when you wish to use the accent mark, "Poké Ball" IS correct. However, when you don't use the accent mark..."Poke Ball" just looks naked and weird and therefore "Pokeball" is just as acceptable. ;>