Wonder Trade

[Suicune's Fire]

After all that seems to be the point of my existance these days… the entertainment of humans. Bah.

*existence

something I knew to be a Pokeball,

That should be two separate words: poké ball.


I kept meaning to get around to reading this, and fiiiiiiiinally I did. xD I like the idea. It's a really cool premise for a little story. I reckon you could have made it a little longer though, such as maybe gone into a bit more detail about where they ended up and what they'd been through (maybe why they were wonder traded in the first place), etc. My first though was that it was a magcargo, based on the slow speed, rock slide attack and being "older than most." I think it could have been a sudowoodo (omg I just realised that it's meant to be "pseudo wood...o." Wow) too, because of the bushes aspect, where as a magcargo would live in a more volcanic area typically. I don't know if you had an actual pokemon in mind though.


Nice little piece. :] I like the idea.