Wow. I loved it Harry! It has all my favourite things... dystopians, science and Bulbasaur! I wish it was longer because I wanted to learn more about the world you've created here. Like whether there are still trainers and what happened to the gyms and that sort of thing. I thought the Feral Pokemon idea was really cool. That Pidgeot was extremely scary. It's amazing to think how terrifying the Pokemon world could be if Pokemon were a little less docile. The recurring fat jokes added some much needed humour to such a sad story. I also loved the description when Sarah was evolving. That paragraph was lovely. Nice name choice too. ;) I also liked that Sarah was given a choice about whether to sacrifice herself, that the scientists were shown to raise and care for her and not treat her as just some tool or experiment and force her into creating the cure. It was a nice change to what might have been expected.

Your writing is so lovely and engaging, you should really do it more often! I know URPG has changed since I participated, and you don't need a battle to catch a Pokemon anymore. I was curious so I checked out the URPG version to see what Pokemon you were going for. xD I do like the change, since I generally used to add battles as an afterthought to my stories. Best of luck with the competition! And thanks for sharing this with us. :)