[WAR] The Prism League

[HKim]

So after a couple hours I managed to bang out a submission for the first week of the creative writing part of the WAR. It's set around the time of the Salem Witch Trials, and I'm worried it might be a bit controversial, or it's not enough like the actual period in time...
I was wondering if anyone wants to proofread it and give me some constructive criticism on how to improve it? I really know very little about historical fiction, but I still wanted to participate because I thought my idea seemed kind of interesting.

I don't quite have the time to read your submission, but I'm sure that people would be pretty forgiving about a depiction of a time period. After all, most of us aren't experts of that part of history.

As for controversial, I think it would be fine as long as you don't delve into certain topics like rape or nudity. Perhaps you can put a ratings on your story to warn anyone before they read it.

Name: Morzone
Gender: male
Favorite color: emerald green/sea blue
skills: RP'ing, writing, amateur graphic design, and every now and then: humor.

Apologies for the lateness, I didn't see HKim's message until today. I generally don't check my messages because I generally don't get any. I will remember to check more often in the future.

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