Quote Originally Posted by Charmander009 View Post
I also read the first chapter--I have to say for someone who knows next to nothing about Megaman, you definitely drew me into the story, ('specially with the humor at the beginning). At first I didn't understand what Mavericks were or Reploids, but after I read your story I hopped onto a Megaman Wiki and looked it up xD I'm very much intrigued! Think I'll be sticking around and reading more! ^^

I do have to say though that I kinda lost a sense of setting after they were dispatched to the attack site--I wasn't really sure what they were looking through (buildings, I guess, but what kind? What was in them?) But other than that, I really enjoyed it! :D
The first chapter was written well over a year ago. I have a habit of not explaining environmental detail too well and I -hopefully- learned from that and expanded more on environmental detail. It was basically a more open area with a lot of debris everywhere, like if a bomb went off. I'm glad I drew you into the story though and made you look stuff up. XD I like getting people into a good franchise. I have I think 9 chapters right now and am working on the latest chapter right now. I plan on finishing it and since I update in rather long intervals of time... not by choice, I find it hard to avoid redundancies... ><

I'm glad you like it though, its nice to know I don't write crap. XD


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I think I could voice act, depends on what you need. XD inb4everything