[PXFIRE] [SU/DS] PXFIRE Roleplay - A Game of Storms

[Neo Emolga]

@Death's Spook

Everything for Anthony the Electrode-bisecting Mimikyu is pretty good so far, just need those personality bits, though I already have a pretty good idea of what that is.

History for The Grand Lady is pretty interesting, especially the part about her evolving without her clan's consent. Just needs that personality part, but so far so good. When you're fully done and ready for me to check it out, just make a post about it. :)

@Velocity

I really LOVE what you did with the history on Jones! Dang, that's a hell of a rough upbringing, but it does make her a very interesting character with a lot to reflect and touch base on throughout the RP. Everything else with her, including the eccentric personality and description are good bits also!

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@LKWayvern

Everything looks great so far! Definitely a lot of nice touches on the personality and all that good stuff. Background is good, but just post when you're all finished and set for me to give it the full checkup.

@The Nonexistent Tazz

Dang, that's definitely one sad-looking Lilligant. And yeeeep, I know someone who fits the bill as a "wanton hedonist." NOT a pretty picture. Still, interesting to see what she lacks in appearance, she has in skill. Still, it makes for a very interesting personality that I'm curious to see how it plays out in the RP itself.

Definitely very high on the good, detailed background Nora has. I liked the way you made great use of the map already and really tied it closely with her background. That's great stuff and I'm liking what I see. Enjoy the RP and I'm looking forward to seeing where Nora's path goes.

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Going to work on a character and get it up asap. Might flex out a different idea or character than usual.

Dude! Glad to see you're going to give role playing another try. :3 Hey, try whatever you'd like! If you later decide to stay with something that feels a bit more cozy, that's fine too.

Not gonna lie, I busted out the Pyrite Town tunes while working out this. *snaps in rhythm*

Funny, I usually had this playing in the background. But that Pyrite Town theme works great too. >:3

Decidueye! That's a Pokémon I haven't seen in an RP yet. Definitely AWESOME job with the description and the background, and I would say the only thing barring it from approval is the personality part, but I already have a good idea of what that's like judging from how the background is. And that's a great background that reads like a whole story in itself! Also, it's so RARE to see a character that already has a family with kids and all. That's a nice touch!

Just post a heads up when you're all done! But definitely great work so far!

I'll write up my 2 characters as soon as I can, but I have a question:

Is there a time limit between our posts? in WAR II we had to wait 48 hours between posts so that people who could be on more didn't overwhelm those who can't. It was also to make judging easier. (though it was a different judging system so who knows if it would actually help)

I've been thinking this over and I've been a bit on the fence about it. What I'm going to do is try week 1 with no posting limits. If it seems like things are really crazy, I'll put some kind of limit in for Week 2 and onward, but I want to see what the posting rate is like and then judge what kind of limit, if any, would be needed. WAR II's RP really wasn't that active at all, so I think having the limit in that case might have hurt it.

We'll see how things go, but if it looks like it's really needed, I'll give it consideration based on the levels of posting I'm seeing.

@Steel Lunpara

I like Chance's attire. And his name. :3

The personality definitely has a nice spark to it. My kind of style. The background is brief, but it gets the job done and doesn't touch base on more than it needs to. I like how it's tied to the Tempest Festival and that Chance already has some connection to it. This gets my stamp of approval!

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THE CAST

THE GRACIDEA ORDER
Athena Pallas the Decidueye Played by Noblejanobii <WIP>
Nora the Lilligant - Played by The Nonexistent Tazz <APPROVED>

THE STEEL SCAVENGERS
Anthony Carpenter-Weaver the Mimikyu - Played by Death's Spook <WIP>
Grand Lady the Tsareena - Played by Death's Spook <WIP>
Max Clerk the Klinklang - Played by Death's Spook <WIP>

THE PRANKSTER PLATOON
Jones Sandstrider the Heliolisk - Played by Velocity <APPROVED>
Laura Bette Kaye the Umbreon - Played by LKWayvern <WIP>
Chance Jehenna the Zangoose - Played by Steel Lunpara <APPROVED>

[Noblejanobii]

Funny, I usually had this playing in the background. But that Pyrite Town theme works great too. >:3

Decidueye! That's a Pokémon I haven't seen in an RP yet. Definitely AWESOME job with the description and the background, and I would say the only thing barring it from approval is the personality part, but I already have a good idea of what that's like judging from how the background is. And that's a great background that reads like a whole story in itself! Also, it's so RARE to see a character that already has a family with kids and all. That's a nice touch!

Just post a heads up when you're all done! But definitely great work so far!

Oh oops, I forgot to fill that out. XD I just added a little blurb in about her personality, sorry for not filling that out initially.

That aside, yeah I can see this song play as well. Fits very well with the atmosphere as well. And thanks! I've been trying to pick pokémon and species I haven't rped or written with before more recently, expanding my horizons and all. I knew I wanted a grass type and when I pulled that into a generator Decidueye was what came out. The story just kind of wrote itself! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it though, hopefully Athena will be an interesting character to work with!