Quote Originally Posted by Noblejanobii View Post
I LIKE USING MY NAMES OKAY! But you've met Shayla before! She was in Tri-Kappa Labs, remember? She's a super old OC of mine and originally her last name was Perkins because I'm uncreative. SO it kinda felt weird to change that and here we are.
XD OKAY THAT MAKES SENSE! Don't worry, I think she's as cool as you are. B) Well you're a bit cooler. And yeah I think I remember her!
*read Tri-Kappa labs a few years ago* xD

Quote Originally Posted by Noblejanobii View Post
Yeah I had someone else point out to me about the large paragraphs thing. It's a side effect from my RPing days, according to them, which I never even really thought about. That should be largely rectified in Chapter 2. There's a few instances in chapter 2 where there's like, a large paragraph but it's more of because the situation kind of warranted it? I can explain in more detail after you read it if you'd like.

You know what's funny is I had three beta readers on this and none of them pointed any of this out. XD And yeah, I don't see semicolons used that often so I tend to forget they exist sometimes. Hahaha whoops.

You'll find out what gijinka he is next chapter! In fact you'll find out quite a lot about him next chapter. ;)

Thanks! I'll look over your edits again later and see if I have any questions. I would right now but HOMEWORK.
Oh really? Haha that makes sense. Well I'll definitely check out chapter 2 today so I'll look out for it. B) And yeah, it definitely depends on the situation.

That's because I'm the only beta reader you need. ;)

OOO: I can't wait!

No worries. STUPID HOMEWORK.