AAAHHHH SORRY I MEANT TO RESPOND TO THIS SOONER THEN I FORGOT.

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Thank you, Xanthe. I'm not quite sure about the Umbreon; I gave it a slightly more cartoony appearance and exaggerated some facial features to overall make it seem more goofy. Does the problem revolve around this, maybe, or is it something else?

To be totally honest, the Alakazam was a revamp of a revamp. I originally made one in the DPP style a few years back, and then revamped it again to match the style of Gen V. The BW Alakazam's outlines are actually mainly black.

I think maybe the problem is with the Machamp. It has many more colored outlines...then again, looking at its official Gen V one, it does have a lot of "broken" outlines. Although maybe I did use too much color for the line art on Golem, too. Come to think of it, that Golem revamp looks really off to begin with. :| Anyways, thank you!

The description of the offending pixel on the Skitty is a little vague, so I'm not sure that I understand where exactly you're talking about. xD; However, that did make me look at it with a lot more scrutiny and I did end up finding a couple of other errors. :>

They were both minor errors, but made a big difference overall. x] I just love the scrutiny that comes with pixel art.
I think it might be the shape of the head around the mouth part, how it goes out at the sides. And also the large mouth in general. XD It's just an opinion though; the actual pixel work is great, of course.

Ahhh, that makes sense. x) Maybe. I liked the machamp though. Yeah, I think I remember seeing in a few different sprites of machamp that they had broken outlines. Lol nah, I think it looks great. No worries! ^^

Lol it is! But that looks much better! :D You addressed what I found amiss, and now the pink is skirting nicely with no offending pixels, as you put it. xD Beautiful work. c: And I agree; it's amazing how A FEW PIXELS can make such a giant difference. xD

I am in love with all of your fusions. xD Tell me again, how do you do it exactly? I'm sure you fuse them to get their proportions/features and then you scratch them in your own pose after that? Or something similar? I really like them all; I don't think you need to entirely redo the quilmeleon. I think the feet are a little rigid, so fixing that would suffice. ^^ The others I have nothing to critique because they're so awesome, except, actually the blastogatr's shell seems to be sitting weirdly. I feel like the line between the skin and the shell could be more rounded or something, as the way it is now makes it look like it's jutting out to the side rather than sitting on its back. I'm not really sure how to fix it, but that's what it looks like. Aside from that, I think that the treekosaur is fine apart from the spots. The red is awkward when blotched on the green like that; I think doing a darker green like how it is on bulbasaur would work better, especially if you minimised the places that the spots sit.

I didn't know what DarkNerd was talking about with the treekorita until I saw the shiny version; that central pixel looks like the pupil, which DOES give it a creepy stare. XD I know that it's actually looking toward the ground, but the shiny version is deceiving. But yeah, aside from those points, I really love them. ^v^


~SF.