Gible Bites (Comic) plus chat!

[Pokemon Trainer Sarah]

Looking forward to it! :)

[Chibi Altaria]

Same here, waiting impatiently. c:

[Chakramaster]

Coming soon!

@Suicune's Fire @Pokemon Trainer Sarah @Neo Emolga @Lunar Latias

Definitely looking forward to it later! Even if the issue in the first part is more serious, but like the others. I must wait impatiently xD

[Rival Max]

Suicune's Fire #2 Tell me how you feel? Part 1 @Suicune's Fire






















Also now that youve seen it Xanthe. I have the dialog saved if you have time I can send it you and you can clean up the grammar and maybe add more a xanthe touch to the Suicune's characters words. I hope you all enjoy this.
@Pokemon Trainer Sarah @Neo Emolga @Chibi Altaria @Chakramaster

[Pokemon Trainer Sarah]

Hahaha oh man! Poor Suicune xD Gible causes trouble everywhere he goes... Reminds me of someone ;) I love that young Suicune has braces! Really cute! xD The fire looks great too. :) Awesome as usual!

[Chibi Altaria]

AHAHAHA SUICUNE HAS BRACES. XD I LOVE IT. And Gible causing a mess, of course. Can't wait for the next part!

[Neo Emolga]

Nuuuuuu, not Gible! X3

This was brilliant with a great mix of suspense and humor. And I agree with Gemma, Suicune with braces is classic and comical. XD

[Suicune's Fire]

JOE THIS IS THE BEST COMIC EVER BECAUSE IT STARS ME! I have always really loved the story of the Burned Tower. :c It's so sad but so beautiful. I love that that's what her dreams are about! :D AND OH MY GOSH tween Johto Beasts are adorable, holy crap. <3 I love how Entei is a bit of a dope. XD So cute. Awesome issue. I really love the way you draw and how you've done all the effects! The doctor is seriously the best. XD I love his cute circular glasses. Honestly reading your comics bring me so much joy. <3

HOLY CRAP. GIBLE. XDDD I loved the comedic turn of this page! So funny. Of COURSE it was Gible, that little trouble maker! I love the way Suicune responded to it too, hahaha. "I think I'm just going to let the fire get me," hahaha. Brilliant. I love the doctor's response to it too. XD

I can't wait to read the second part! :D Awesome job with this one!

[Rival Max]

AHAHAHA SUICUNE HAS BRACES. XD I LOVE IT. And Gible causing a mess, of course. Can't wait for the next part!

Nuuuuuu, not Gible! X3

This was brilliant with a great mix of suspense and humor. And I agree with Gemma, Suicune with braces is classic and comical. XD

@Pokemon Trainer Sarah included.

JOE THIS IS THE BEST COMIC EVER BECAUSE IT STARS ME! I have always really loved the story of the Burned Tower. :c It's so sad but so beautiful. I love that that's what her dreams are about! :D AND OH MY GOSH tween Johto Beasts are adorable, holy crap. <3 I love how Entei is a bit of a dope. XD So cute. Awesome issue. I really love the way you draw and how you've done all the effects! The doctor is seriously the best. XD I love his cute circular glasses. Honestly reading your comics bring me so much joy. <3

HOLY CRAP. GIBLE. XDDD I loved the comedic turn of this page! So funny. Of COURSE it was Gible, that little trouble maker! I love the way Suicune responded to it too, hahaha. "I think I'm just going to let the fire get me," hahaha. Brilliant. I love the doctor's response to it too. XD

I can't wait to read the second part! :D Awesome job with this one!

Im really glad you all enjoyed it! The original ending was going to he much sader. The story of the burnt tower has always been sad. So when working on the story I wanted it to be something painful. When working on a sequel I found that it was important to break from the format of the firsr comic. This gave me freedom to try and pull more out of the character. Which i hope i was able to do.

The issue was originally not suppose to be broken up into two. I know some of you enjoy seeing the sketches. Below im posting the storyboards used to frame this. The drawings arent great but the storyboards actually help keep the comic on track. It also should give you an idea of what i give myself to work with lol the drawings include spoilers so if you dont want any idea of whats next maybe dont look.

Spoiler:

[Suicune's Fire]

Yeah, I think it really worked out well. I adore the way you made everything come together. There was a lot of emotion in it. It was really funny when Gible popped up though. XD

Wow, I love the storyboarding! I reckon sketches are vital when it comes to making a comic. I like seeing all yours. :D