Its taken awhile but the new issue will be ready today!
Its taken awhile but the new issue will be ready today!
Proud partner with @Pokemon Trainer Sarah
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Gible Bites 28: Detective Lumin Midnight
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some of the slang used in this comic. If you are curious
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@Pokemon Trainer Sarah @Neo Emolga @Suicune's Fire @Chakramaster @Noblejanobii - i tagged you because i know you like the title character.
So I came up with this character years ago but never had a way to us it. All of sudden Photobucket screwed over my comic and it gave me an idea. I hope you all enjoy the film nior style. I tried to stick close to the style i looked into.
Last edited by Rival Max; 08-23-2017 at 01:17 AM.
Proud partner with @Pokemon Trainer Sarah
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You already know me. I love the mystery themes. So I love it anyway xD. Hearing the name 'Gumshoe' I can help, but think of Detective Gumshoe in Ace Attorney.
I really enjoyed this one! I think the idea behind it really works for it. Especially after all the things that happened with Photobucket not long ago. Detective alumni really works well and the characters were intriguing. Hope to see more on it one day for sure!
The time is upon us...
. Pika Pair with the yellow bundle of fluff Chibi Altaria..
The artwork is awesome! I didn't think you would go for the noir style but you did a pretty good job with it!
I think the only thing I had trouble with was the text. It's a bit too dark and hard to read. In fact, I couldn't read it at all on my phone and had to switch over to my desktop.
The surprise ending was pretty funny! As someone who also lost a lot because of bloody Photobucket's stupid blunders, this was easy to relate to. :3
Thanks for letting me know. Ill adjust the colors for thr font.
@Neo Emolga . I adjusted the font let me know if its better now.
Last edited by Rival Max; 08-23-2017 at 01:18 AM.
Proud partner with @Pokemon Trainer Sarah
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I was testing out a new color scheme just to match the umbreon feel. Normally i stick with blue and black feel for the main points.
Also braodway font isnt that great. Ill mix it up for the next one. Find something thats easier to read.
Proud partner with @Pokemon Trainer Sarah
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I think you did an amazing job getting the style right! The shadows and stuff! It's all perfect! I really like the first panel! And you did a great job on the inside of the car. I also loved the twist at the end haha. Also Gible in that photo with the cupcake underneath... Reminds me of when he ate his girlfriend. xDDD
Do you want me to reupload your comic banner for the forum? Even though now it kind of fits your current story. XD
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