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[Rival Max]

Its taken awhile but the new issue will be ready today!

[Rival Max]

Gible Bites 28: Detective Lumin Midnight

Spoiler:

some of the slang used in this comic. If you are curious

Spoiler:

Words to Use
On the nut: Broke or needs money
Gumshoe: Detective
Heap: Car
Hitting on all eight: IN good shape, going well
Made: reconized
Plant: someone unseen
Jam: Tight spot
Fakeloo artist: Con Man
Tail: some following you
Can: Jail

@Pokemon Trainer Sarah @Neo Emolga @Suicune's Fire @Chakramaster @Noblejanobii - i tagged you because i know you like the title character.

So I came up with this character years ago but never had a way to us it. All of sudden Photobucket screwed over my comic and it gave me an idea. I hope you all enjoy the film nior style. I tried to stick close to the style i looked into.

[Chakramaster]

Gible Bites 28: Detective Lumin Midnight

Spoiler:

some of the slang used in this comic. If you are curious

Spoiler:

Words to Use
On the nut: Broke or needs money
Gumshoe: Detective
Heap: Car
Hitting on all eight: IN good shape, going well
Made: reconized
Plant: someone unseen
Jam: Tight spot
Fakeloo artist: Con Man
Tail: some following you
Can: Jail

@Pokemon Trainer Sarah @Neo Emolga @Suicune's Fire @Chakramaster @Noblejanobii - i tagged you because i know you like the title character.

So I came up with this character years ago but never had a way to us it. All of sudden Photobucket screwed over my comic and it gave me an idea. I hope you all enjoy the film nior style. I tried to stick close to the style i looked into.

You already know me. I love the mystery themes. So I love it anyway xD. Hearing the name 'Gumshoe' I can help, but think of Detective Gumshoe in Ace Attorney.

I really enjoyed this one! I think the idea behind it really works for it. Especially after all the things that happened with Photobucket not long ago. Detective alumni really works well and the characters were intriguing. Hope to see more on it one day for sure!

[Rival Max]

You already know me. I love the mystery themes. So I love it anyway xD. Hearing the name 'Gumshoe' I can help, but think of Detective Gumshoe in Ace Attorney.

I really enjoyed this one! I think the idea behind it really works for it. Especially after all the things that happened with Photobucket not long ago. Detective alumni really works well and the characters were intriguing. Hope to see more on it one day for sure!

Im glad you liked it. I had a little trouble with nior style so its cool to hear it worked out.

[Neo Emolga]

The artwork is awesome! I didn't think you would go for the noir style but you did a pretty good job with it!

I think the only thing I had trouble with was the text. It's a bit too dark and hard to read. In fact, I couldn't read it at all on my phone and had to switch over to my desktop.

The surprise ending was pretty funny! As someone who also lost a lot because of bloody Photobucket's stupid blunders, this was easy to relate to. :3

[Rival Max]

The artwork is awesome! I didn't think you would go for the noir style but you did a pretty good job with it!

I think the only thing I had trouble with was the text. It's a bit too dark and hard to read. In fact, I couldn't read it at all on my phone and had to switch over to my desktop.

The surprise ending was pretty funny! As someone who also lost a lot because of bloody Photobucket's stupid blunders, this was easy to relate to. :3

Thanks for letting me know. Ill adjust the colors for thr font.
@Neo Emolga . I adjusted the font let me know if its better now.

[Neo Emolga]

Thanks for letting me know. Ill adjust the colors for thr font.
@Neo Emolga . I adjusted the font let me know if its better now.

Yeah, that's definitely better. I don't think it would be wrong to make it all white for future installments (white on black background or black on white background). It's just hard to read if it's a dark font color on a dark background.

[Rival Max]

I was testing out a new color scheme just to match the umbreon feel. Normally i stick with blue and black feel for the main points.

Also braodway font isnt that great. Ill mix it up for the next one. Find something thats easier to read.

[Neo Emolga]

I was testing out a new color scheme just to match the umbreon feel. Normally i stick with blue and black feel for the main points.

Also braodway font isnt that great. Ill mix it up for the next one. Find something thats easier to read.

I think the Broadway font would be good for the title, but I wouldn't do the entire comic with it. A normal comic font would probably work best.

[Pokemon Trainer Sarah]

I think you did an amazing job getting the style right! The shadows and stuff! It's all perfect! I really like the first panel! And you did a great job on the inside of the car. I also loved the twist at the end haha. Also Gible in that photo with the cupcake underneath... Reminds me of when he ate his girlfriend. xDDD

Do you want me to reupload your comic banner for the forum? Even though now it kind of fits your current story. XD