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your turn to roll
Aww what an awesome new issue! I noticed a few errors, to get them out the way first...
1. The move is 'withdraw,' not 'withdrawal.'
2. You wrote "are" instead of "our" in a few places. "They are our leaves." Not "They are are leaves." Two different words.
3. "There unfortunately demise" should be "their."
I loved this comic page. XD Your art style is always really cool! I love that you chose magnemite to represent this story! It worked really well. I sort of took it seriously though because it's such a serious issue, but it was still funny that he interpreted the advice wrong! I wonder what the evil scheme is about! Haha. Really nicely done, as always!
I missed Gible Bites. ;n;
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