Coru
Velocity
Fitting to Theme: 7/10
Look: 7/10
Skill and Effort: Skill- 4/5 Effort- 4/5
Experimentation/Risk: 8/10
Total: 30/40
Oh wow. I wasn’t expecting a comic strip, haha. A nice little change and you have made it fit within the theme too, which could have been hard when first starting out. It also has a slight comedy to it so it isn’t just so art in a comic that doesn’t have any impact. Your creativity really shines through here and it shows that you are a great comic maker, being able to create a story and the art for it. The art style is consistent and it is well done, however, there isn’t a mention of pokemon. It isn’t much of an issue, as in the thread it does not specifically state it must be pokemon related, however, it was intended to be a pokemon based contest. Well Done, great job here.
Braixen
Name: Velocity
Fitting to Theme: 5/10
Look: 8/10
Skill and Effort: Skill- 4/5 Effort- 4/5
Experimentation/Risk: 8/10
Total: 29/40
A great comic with some unique OCs! I commend you for your creative talents and the style is beautiful. I really admire the finished product and think it’s very festive - but you forgot one thing… the Pokemon! But, I think you knew that :P. I had to dock quite a few points based on that, and although I think a big effort was made you didn’t make an effort to put Pokemon in it so that is why I removed one point there, as well as half the theme points. Great job, regardless and I’m glad you submitted despite not featuring any Pokemon. Maybe this is a good reason to host non Pokemon related art contests occasionally in the future.
Overall Total: 59/80
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