@Caite-chan: go for it! I don't think you have anything to lose, but a lot to gain from it. :D and sorry Selkie like I've been URPG'ing for the past three hours so I never got around to critiquiNG your thing. Fail.

Oh and that being said, guys, I will critique entries before the due date comes around! All you have to do is ask. After all, I'm here to help you guys learn!