Don't Forget Me

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Thank you all for your feedback. It's greatly appreciated and I look forward to sharing more of Syza with you in the near future.

Couldn't resist clicking on this title xD

Very interesting! I'm trying to figure out if this is a literal human running with a pack of Absol or a human turned into an Absol xD I'm figuring the latter. But why?!?! So many questions! Hope you post more soon!

I'm glad you found it interesting, Sarah. You're correct with your assumption. Syza is a human turned Absol. Why? Well, you'll just have to wait to find out!

I actually thought this was a writing discussion thread, but instead I got instantly hooked into this interesting gem of a story and like Sarah, now I'm wondering what's going on here.

VERY captivating prologue you've got here! Anyone who has trouble hooking in readers could take a lesson from this!

Hey, I'm honored that you enjoyed it, Neo. I'm a HUGE fan of your The Trial of Juno series, so it's awesome to know that an exceptional writer like yourself is interested in what I have to offer.

I was extremely careful with this prologue. I wanted to make sure it was quick to the point and engaging, but also left readers hungry for more. I'm glad that it succeeding at serving it's purpose. I can't wait to share more of Syza in the near future.

Nicely written so far. O: I agree with the others; it was captivating and left me wanting more. I like the stylisation of using the silver/grey text, but it's also not too visible on light skins. xD So perhaps leaving the text uncoloured would be a good idea, but that's just a suggestion.

I like Syza's thoughts on the absol around him. It makes me also wonder about Ryder. At first he seemed like a bit of a bully, but he also seems to have a high rank in the pack. Maybe.

If you post more, I'll definitely read more. :D

Thanks for the compliment! I appreciate it!

It's funny that you mention the silver/grey text. I was actually conflicted on whether I should utilize it or not and ultimately decided to do so. However, I appreciate your feedback and will definitely experiment with other colors to make it easier on the eyes of readers.

And Ryder... yeah, he's quite the character. I can't wait to share more of him and the story of Syza in its entirety soon!