[GCEA Event: 20 Years Later] To Make Things Right

[Pokemon Trainer Sarah]

I actually really liked this, so I don't think you should feel bad about it! I think the idea was great! I had a similar one - going back to stop Dredd being made. But mine was to kill Max while yours was much more subtle. I think it fits Rose well. And I liked that you explained she had been trying to figure out how to change things for so long. It made her decision to jump in really believable. I also like that in the end it seemed to fail, but there is still a bit of hope. If only because I like sad stories. :D And it also makes it seem like maybe what happened was just inevitable. Seriously this is really good! :D