[GCEA Event: 20 Years Later] To Make Things Right

[Dragon Master Mike]

I actually really liked this, so I don't think you should feel bad about it! I think the idea was great! I had a similar one - going back to stop Dredd being made. But mine was to kill Max while yours was much more subtle. I think it fits Rose well. And I liked that you explained she had been trying to figure out how to change things for so long. It made her decision to jump in really believable. I also like that in the end it seemed to fail, but there is still a bit of hope. If only because I like sad stories. :D And it also makes it seem like maybe what happened was just inevitable. Seriously this is really good! :D

Thank you so much lol. That actually made me feel a lot better about this. I really need to stop being so harsh on myself. I have to read everyone else's story now, I kinda skimmed over Brettles' and Comatose's, but I want to actually sit down and read all of them.

[Pokemon Trainer Sarah]

Thank you so much lol. That actually made me feel a lot better about this. I really need to stop being so harsh on myself. I have to read everyone else's story now, I kinda skimmed over Brettles' and Comatose's, but I want to actually sit down and read all of them.

Glad I could help! You're a really good writer. :) Everyone's stories are pretty cool, you should definitely check em out!