AWESOME second page, @MajorLeeMan! I just have two nitpicks... Both the same misspelling of "you're." You're is "you are," hence the ' and the "re". I'm sorry to be a bother, but would it be okay if you changed both instances where Natalya says 'your' and make them 'you're? C: In the second and third speech bubbles.


ALSO @Nekomata you reckon we should get our own subforum? :D It would be so cool if we did. I think we should wait until we've all had a turn with the pages because then at least we would know if we could keep it going (which hopefully we all can) and then yeah, it would be good to have a sub-forum because then we could keep all the threads together and have a ref thread and everything would be nice and neat. :3c