Gible Bites (Comic) plus chat!

[Rival Max]

The artwork is awesome! I didn't think you would go for the noir style but you did a pretty good job with it!

I think the only thing I had trouble with was the text. It's a bit too dark and hard to read. In fact, I couldn't read it at all on my phone and had to switch over to my desktop.

The surprise ending was pretty funny! As someone who also lost a lot because of bloody Photobucket's stupid blunders, this was easy to relate to. :3

Thanks for letting me know. Ill adjust the colors for thr font.
@Neo Emolga . I adjusted the font let me know if its better now.