-
growing strong
I think I like the sad ending best too. I felt like the whole story was kind of leading up to that sad but sweet release. Poor Charmander.
I like the mysteriousness of the Snorlax being made out of snow and the descriptions of how a Charmander would fare in that kind of weather. The hissing of the snow landing on his tail was really nice imagery. :) Thanks for sharing!
-
Posting Permissions
- You may not post new threads
- You may not post replies
- You may not post attachments
- You may not edit your posts
-
Forum Rules
Bookmarks