Gible Bites (Comic) plus chat!

[Suicune's Fire]

Dredd, the improvement is phenomenal! I love that you've managed to develop your style so much over the course of the comic. It's really amazing. :] I'm so proud of you! ;o;

I really liked all the different poses and facial expressions they held, and how you now redraw them for each frame! It's great. And ahaha, the sweat got me in the desert panel. xD Especially the puddle under Drifloon's head. xD The cloud on his head is like hair...ahaha. AND THE SEALEO'S FACE. WOW. XD Nicely done.


One grammatical thing is that in the sealeo's speech, I think it should say "our side of the playground" instead of "the side of the playground." Other than that, you're gold. :]

I think that the spheal children makes slightly less sense now that only one of the roughnecks is a sealeo, and also, if they're in school, having all those kids is a little odd too. xD Just thought I'd point it out.


Awesome improvement! 8D I love watching the evolution of art over comics. Also YES, there are plenty of places to upload your comic as one image, such as DeviantART. I would recommend that, even if you just use the "Sta.sh" function which is basically storage that you can link people to, but otherwise can't be viewed. Like a private video on YouTube. :]

[Rival Max]

Dredd, the improvement is phenomenal! I love that you've managed to develop your style so much over the course of the comic. It's really amazing. :] I'm so proud of you! ;o;

I really liked all the different poses and facial expressions they held, and how you now redraw them for each frame! It's great. And ahaha, the sweat got me in the desert panel. xD Especially the puddle under Drifloon's head. xD The cloud on his head is like hair...ahaha. AND THE SEALEO'S FACE. WOW. XD Nicely done.


One grammatical thing is that in the sealeo's speech, I think it should say "our side of the playground" instead of "the side of the playground." Other than that, you're gold. :]

I think that the spheal children makes slightly less sense now that only one of the roughnecks is a sealeo, and also, if they're in school, having all those kids is a little odd too. xD Just thought I'd point it out.


Awesome improvement! 8D I love watching the evolution of art over comics. Also YES, there are plenty of places to upload your comic as one image, such as DeviantART. I would recommend that, even if you just use the "Sta.sh" function which is basically storage that you can link people to, but otherwise can't be viewed. Like a private video on YouTube. :]

How did you lik the extra panels?? Did you notice!any admins?? Lol
Thanks for the kind words! I realized i had devolped my paint skills and comfort over the last year. I felt confident that this remake was a big improvement..i also noticed that it was a little odd only taking speals now..lol